Translation Check by Chrouya
Script: BRS_-_08.ass
Workraw: BRS 08 WR.avi
* Asterisks implying comments *

74
Even the colour that accompanies pain.
*literal, blah.*
*also, colour*

81
*it's correct as is.*

106
How could I have forgotten it?
*wait, I'm a TLCer*

107
Because I couldn't leave Kagari alone back then...

108
Because I had no idea how to become friends with someone...

109
It was painful...I was always hurt.
*omission of tsurakatta*

110
But that's all because I love Mato.
*I added becauses to all the sentences, because she's giving reasons to why she forgot.*
*Having used "love" in this episode every time, I'm okay with using love here too.*

111
Because I wanted to share my pain and sadness with someone!
*more reasons. Maybe too much becauses added...? ^^; *

149
The worlds have merged into one.
*punctuation* 
*also, where's my TLC work here*

159-161
(again, these sentences are all reasons, but I believe adding "because" all the time isn't going to help, is it)

164
*Mato is quoting the words of Strength in line 162...But to add "because" here creates inconsistency*
*so please decide to remove it or let it be...In any case, persons are turn around:*
You...love us...

194
*in fact, the TL given is right on the spot, and I believe that's enough to make up for the context.*

195
Let's properly be in pain together!
*if you don't add the chanto(properly), it feels like they really ARE doM...*

204
We didn't even have to wake you up.
*sorry, I shouldn't qc stuff should I*

210
*kagari seems to say "Yomi!" here, but it's not in the subtitles? That has to be inserted!*

208
*Yomi doesn't actually add ", Kagari" here, but you can leave it for context.*

218
We will accept them all and grow up bit by bit.
*bit by bit was omitted*